My first Montage
Comment and Rate pls
not best my first xD....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CIv4PUjURxY
My first Montage

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My first Montage
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Re: My first Montage
I'll said what I think about you're video.. It's not bad for a first
-The intro is boring and long...
-Your smooth isn't good... = The video "jerk"... and we see the Xfire logo on the height, for Smooth, use fraps
-Don't film 1v1, it's boring and long. Or if you want to make an 1v1 video, make just an 1v1 video with titled "Fash vs Wisley" (for example)
-Cut your video.... 1:22 we wait 10sec to see you kill someone... and it's an example, we can see a lot of clips with the same problem.
-The intro is boring and long...
-Your smooth isn't good... = The video "jerk"... and we see the Xfire logo on the height, for Smooth, use fraps

-Don't film 1v1, it's boring and long. Or if you want to make an 1v1 video, make just an 1v1 video with titled "Fash vs Wisley" (for example)
-Cut your video.... 1:22 we wait 10sec to see you kill someone... and it's an example, we can see a lot of clips with the same problem.
Last edited by DC.LegenD on Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: My first Montage
Boring... the musics make you sleep and doesn't fit at all to the video. Try to avoid those kind of "failures" at 0:19.
And as Legend said, you shouldn't record a 1vs1 and insert it between the public kills.
6/10, because it is your first.
And as Legend said, you shouldn't record a 1vs1 and insert it between the public kills.
6/10, because it is your first.


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Re: My first Montage
Wesley, good job for your first montage.
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Re: My first Montage
nice first try and i kinda like the music^^
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Re: My first Montage
Here we go:
- The first 30 Seconds were totally unnecessary and nobody cares if it is Engine so you could cut this part out. Also its "Wesley Presents" not "Wesley Present"
- The xfire navigation bar makes it look bad, try fraps next time.
- the flight through the Map was boring and unnecessary
- I liked how you synched the kills to the music, it's very dynamic. Just try to cut out all the long stuff before and after a kill.
- The music in general is really boring and monotonous. Try something else next time
- Also don't end your montage with "thanks for watching" you just don't do that
- The first 30 Seconds were totally unnecessary and nobody cares if it is Engine so you could cut this part out. Also its "Wesley Presents" not "Wesley Present"
- The xfire navigation bar makes it look bad, try fraps next time.
- the flight through the Map was boring and unnecessary
- I liked how you synched the kills to the music, it's very dynamic. Just try to cut out all the long stuff before and after a kill.
- The music in general is really boring and monotonous. Try something else next time
- Also don't end your montage with "thanks for watching" you just don't do that

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Re: My first Montage
Wesley in the Video u wrote: Its my FRIST Montage. (First)
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Re: My first Montage
I'm sorry but i thought it was kinda boring.
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