1StepClosers Montage

[1StepClØser]

Hey guys.

This is my new Montage.
Hope u like it.
Enjoy watching ;)

btw im thankful for every criticqe.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ohCG2DH-87Q
(Maybe it doesnt works.)

http://www.myvideo.de/watch/7675281/TX_ ... er_Montage

[Faint]

Nice Instagib kills.
but i cant hear the eye of the tiger anymore

[Xinc]

the kills are`nt that awesome, and the screens in the end are with ma tag ^^

[1StepClØser]

its not important with which tags, is it?

[Graphiix]

Ähh, man..!

I`m to " shy " to say you that, but this montage really sucks..!

The music sounds like fucking gay..!

Their`s some great " freez " in your video dunno if it`s really normal..! But it sucks..!

And kills aren`t that nice at all..! I hope you`ll make a better one next time..!

Good luck by making a new one in future..!

[Ironhide]

The music sounds like fucking gay..!

Lol. This is probably one of the most famous songs in history, can not be that bad then. :)

[1StepClØser]

whats gay at this music?

[Ridley]

its random gameplay with bad slowmo effects and music put over it without any synching whatsoever

[Graphiix]

The music sounds like fucking gay..!

Lol. This is probably one of the most famous songs in history, can not be that bad then. :)

Sorry but in this montage it sounds like really gay. In my opinion that`s not a music for a montage..!

[Matzey]

It was good, that we heard one time in a montage another music.
I like it it's okay.

[Ironhide]

It was good, that we heard one time in a montage another music.
I like it it's okay.

I agree, I've seen worse montages.

Btw. players without any montages at all should not post criticism.

[Graphiix]

Btw. players without any montages at all should not post criticism.

btw im thankful for every criticqe.

Hmm, I don`t think so.

With criticism he will try a better work about his montage the next time ( I hope so ).

I`m not writing this like if i hate 1StepCloser`s video montage!

But compare to Acer`s Video or other montage, I`m sorry it sucks a bit.

In the music isn`t that good for a montage.

Their`s some long " freez ".

Their's a great part of slow motions kills.

Their's not really awesome kills and nice effects.

So sorry 1Step` to say it like that, but your video sucks a bit

I really hope your next montage ( If you make one ) will be more " cool " as your current one.

[Ironhide]

Btw. players without any montages at all should not post criticism.

btw im thankful for every criticqe.

Hmm, I don`t think so.

With criticism he will try a better work about his montage the next time ( I hope so ).

I`m not writing this like if i hate 1StepCloser`s video montage!

But compare to Acer`s Video or other montage, I`m sorry it sucks a bit.

In the music isn`t that good for a montage.

Their`s some long " freez ".

Their's a great part of slow motions kills.

Their's not really awesome kills and nice effects.

So sorry 1Step` to say it like that, but your video sucks a bit

I really hope your next montage ( If you make one ) will be more " cool " as your current one.

That was just what I was waiting for, usefull criticism! :D

[Graphiix]

Btw. players without any montages at all should not post criticism.

btw im thankful for every criticqe.

Hmm, I don`t think so.

With criticism he will try a better work about his montage the next time ( I hope so ).

I`m not writing this like if i hate 1StepCloser`s video montage!

But compare to Acer`s Video or other montage, I`m sorry it sucks a bit.

In the music isn`t that good for a montage.

Their`s some long " freez ".

Their's a great part of slow motions kills.

Their's not really awesome kills and nice effects.

So sorry 1Step` to say it like that, but your video sucks a bit

I really hope your next montage ( If you make one ) will be more " cool " as your current one.

That was just what I was waiting for, usefull criticism! :D

Okey ^^

So sorry didn`t my criticism before like that

[Acer]

Okey I just saw your Montage 1Step and I got to say that it's a good first try.
You should definitely keep doing montages and if you'll be mindful of some tips which I list in the following sentences, your next montage will be much better!

Positive about your montage

- it's not to short and not to long (4:13 mins)
- I liked the idea of syncronising your kills with the music, that dosn't make the montage too boring
- You edited it a bit: using slome effects and the "speed up effects" makes the montage more interesting


Negative about your montage, things you should make better in your next video

- music is always a matter of taste but it's really hard to entertain people with that kind of music, it's an old classic rocksong
- You synced only at the first part of your montage, the rest was boring
- You didn't use any color effects or blur effects, this also makes the montage boring
- the "freeze effect" is a good idea, but it was too long, sometimes I thought that the video is loading or something
- kills weren't awesome, I recommend you to collect and show only the best clips
- You used the slomo effect at kills which weren't necessary to be "slowmoted"
- The intro/outro looked cheap, use a better font. You can get better fonts at dafont.com
- the movie was in 4:3, in 16:9 it looks definitely better (it's possible to make it with sony vegas)
- the most time you were in engine or arena17, try to collect clips also from other maps to break the monotony
- use "panorama/cropping" to blend out the "xfire recording message", which is at the top of your video
- try to cut only the important parts of your sequences, sometimes you just run around without any action


Everyone's first montage isn't realy good, I remember my cheap montages I made with Movie maker
I just want to say that you shouldn't give up!