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It's just a try :O

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i just try to make a little movie from the game CoD6..
so i'm sure to have bad comment xD !!!
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Re: It's just a try :O

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- Intro is cool.
- Music is a nice choice.
- Frags looks interesting.
- Effects are cool except when it " vibs " for the last kill in Sub Base.
- Those nukes are good but already saw theme coz I was with you when you did.

Anyway, nice try for this FIRST try with Sony Vegas.

I`m waiting for Viva`s comment who will say that you`re not a pro coz you use SVP :nasty:
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SiCK wrote:
I`m waiting for Viva`s comment who will say that you`re not a pro coz you use SVP :nasty:
hello mate
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to the clip:
well u guys wanted me to list some advice thats what i did
if u dont use it dont flame if u get bad reactions as mine will be:
lets start off with the good points
soz dont remember anything really good
maybe the music

negative points:
use 16:9
ask more experienced moviemakers how to get a better quality urs sucks
intro is bad dont know what you wanted to achieve with this kinda mask and those sig things are hard to read
effects are ugly and not well integrated into the clip
no sync

thats it
oh and haters gonna hate
you can´t ban me ":D"
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viva wrote: to the clip:
well u guys wanted me to list some advice thats what i did
if u dont use it dont flame if u get bad reactions as mine will be:
lets start off with the good points
soz dont remember anything really good
maybe the music

negative points:
use 16:9
ask more experienced moviemakers how to get a better quality urs sucks
intro is bad dont know what you wanted to achieve with this kinda mask and those sig things are hard to read
effects are ugly and not well integrated into the clip
no sync

thats it
oh and haters gonna hate

ye i know that's why the tittle is "try"

i just wanted to make a Little movie for test Sony Vegas not for make a real good movie (that i can't do x) )

i will try for 16:9 and the sync :O
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The intro is one of the worst ones i have ever seen and i don't get what that thing at 0:08 is supposed to be. Also I wanna see gameplay, not a mostly black screen, as it is right after the "intro".
Also there are almost no cuts whatsoever. It is mostly one bigass clip of mediocre gameplay with cheap fast forward effect in between. Try to use multiple clips of good gameplay and not something like that. Showing how you pointlessly run around is one of the worst things you can do in a montage.
Also the effects you apply are only dragging the quality down, because they seem pretty random in their appearence and don't serve any purpose. The wabbling screen effect in particular looks like eye cancer.
Additionally the music is not synched-up very well and as a result there is no flow at all.

Sorry, but i can't really find anything positive :slash:

And by the way, Nukes don't show skill :wink:
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Ridley wrote:The intro is one of the worst ones i have ever seen and i don't get what that thing at 0:08 is supposed to be. Also I wanna see gameplay, not a mostly black screen, as it is right after the "intro".
Also there are almost no cuts whatsoever. It is mostly one bigass clip of mediocre gameplay with cheap fast forward effect in between. Try to use multiple clips of good gameplay and not something like that. Showing how you pointlessly run around is one of the worst things you can do in a montage.
Also the effects you apply are only dragging the quality down, because they seem pretty random in their appearence and don't serve any purpose. The wabbling screen effect in particular looks like eye cancer.
Additionally the music is not synched-up very well and as a result there is no flow at all.

Sorry, but i can't really find anything positive :slash:

And by the way, Nukes don't show skill :wink:
okay ;)

and for the nuke i know xD
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