Second Try

danieboy24 · Post by **danieboy24** » Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:40 pm

Any more improvements? It's not great again but getting there?

Rageful Bean · Post by **Rageful Bean** » Mon Apr 09, 2012 4:21 pm

Awesome, nice kills!

Could the red be a bit less intense? (if that's possible) If less intense red, and less at the beginning of the last sniper kill at the end, then I would <3 it

That's just constructive criticism, other then that I think it's great! :hurr:

Penguin · Post by **Penguin** » Mon Apr 09, 2012 6:00 pm

I don't like the colours!

When you are having like 10 secs of footage of a guy waiting to get a kill is bad, speed that bit up, then slow it back down like 0.5secs before the kills start occurring.

Firetrap900 · Post by **Firetrap900** » Tue Apr 10, 2012 12:06 am

yes i think the colours are to strong maybe tone them down but otherwise your getting the idea

i found some usefull tuts

infact just check out them all from this guy

http://www.youtube.com/user/xSaundi

Post by **Hasero** » Tue Apr 10, 2012 12:09 am

Penguin wrote:I don't like the colours!

When you are having like 10 secs of footage of a guy waiting to get a kill is bad, speed that bit up, then slow it back down like 0.5secs before the kills start occurring.

Agreed with Penguin.

I do like the transition with the crumbeling wall at the end, if you time it well it looks really awesome! Good second try, transitions are better. Bet you so should remove the colours!

Firetrap900 · Post by **Firetrap900** » Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:12 am

plz post in montage section

locked and moved

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