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no effects nothing special this is just a j4f clip !!!!!!


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- awwwwwww cmon........why clean edit? ur overeditted clips are way better in the editting point of view

+ the free cams are nicely done and are pretty smoth especially the ones on a17

- pan crop fail and some black screens in the middle of the action ( dunno why it happened but that MUSNT happen)

+- clips are okay nothing special but okay....but please dont take any clips.....only take the ones with a decent resolution cause the shotty part on a17 is simply ugly

all in all a decent clip

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viva wrote:- awwwwwww cmon........why clean edit? ur overeditted clips are way better in the editting point of view

+ the free cams are nicely done and are pretty smoth especially the ones on a17

- pan crop fail and some black screens in the middle of the action ( dunno why it happened but that MUSNT happen)

+- clips are okay nothing special but okay....but please dont take any clips.....only take the ones with a decent resolution cause the shotty part on a17 is simply ugly

all in all a decent clip

- Viva :)
Geat idea ill re-edit it @ we with more effects.Thnaks for the feedback.
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poets of the fall name rip ftw =P
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I would also like to give you some feedback. :-)

Postive:
+ I liked the song and I think the most out there also do so
+ I liked the camera movement, especially at A17 (like Viva said)
+ The kill streak in ArenaA17 was impressive
+ I liked the color of the first half (kachiro) it wasn't "overlighted" and not to dark
+ I liked the intro, although it's not selfmade (somehow it fits to a miniclip like it used to be)

Negative:
- the quality of the quite impressive clip at A17 is really really bad, it kinda destroys the cool atmosphere of the cool camera movement before
- the panorama/cropping in A17 was bad
- some of the "speed up" effects at the beginning of your miniclip (kachiro) weren't well edited, although you tried to sync it
- the clips on kachiro didn't show ownage skill

Maybe I forgot some points. All in all I liked it :up:
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Acer wrote: - the clips on kachiro didn't show ownage skill

u can upload some good ownage clips from u for me if u want :alien:
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haha everyone tries to imitate my style of feedback :roll:

Anyway, i mostly agree with what Viva and Acer already said and for some reason i dislike video flow. Although everything is synched up perfectly fine it just doesn't really fit together. Try not to put too many fast forward and slowmo effects within a short time span. Makes it look weird to me .
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Ridley wrote:haha everyone tries to imitate my style of feedback
I doubt you've been the first one using it anyway, since it is just a pro and con list. ;)
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Ridley wrote:haha everyone tries to imitate my style of feedback :roll:

Anyway, i mostly agree with what Viva and Acer already said and for some reason i dislike video flow. Although everything is synched up perfectly fine it just doesn't really fit together. Try not to put too many fast forward and slowmo effects within a short time span. Makes it look weird to me .
i do not try to immitate u at all
i just think that its stupid to write omg its awesome or omg it sucks
this is a normal feeback and not taken from u at all
to the weird flow
its not only cause of the fast forwards its because of the music playin to it the music is really slow paced which also requires a slower edit and no fast forwards as long as they are not synced to the music aswell
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Haha guys don't take it too seriously it was just a joke :wink:
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